September 23, 2009 Dear Garrett, Hey, how’s it going? It’s the beginning of junior year and you’re struggling to write this letter. You’re not very good at writing at all, really. You’re pretty inconsistent in your tone. You have many thoughts, but you lack organization. You have a lot trouble writing the first sentence because you never know how to start your writing. It took you like an hour to start this, and I don’t really think you’re doing a good job. You have trouble with diction, I guess you a have a baby vocabulary. You’re kind of good at a few things though. You have many ideas in your head. I guess you can be good at defending a point, sometimes. It seems like you can write forever it is just really unorganized and probably does not sound so good. Right now you are trying to improve your writing skills and hoping you have by the time you are reading it. I’m thinking you can just start writing a lot more and practice. Possibly by having to write a lot for English class this year you will get better. You like reading a lot more than writing. You could read for days, unless you’re forced to read something you’re not interested in. You can read fast, I guess. You’re pretty good at comprehending and just remembering what you read. Other times, you can just be really unmotivated to read and you won’t even actually take in what you’re reading. This year you really hope to get better at writing. You would like to get better organization skills. I’m not too good at brainstorming as well. I would like to read more books, and I would like to learn to appreciate better writings. Overall, you need to do better in all of your classes for the rest of the time you’re in high school. You need to get in less trouble. It would be cool to graduate with a good GPA, but you kind of have low standards. After you get out of high school, you need to get a good job, son. You better still be skateboarding, and it would be cool if you found a honey dip. I will be proud of you, or me, if you meet these goals. Thanks for reading, I hope it helped you in some way. Happy Kwanza. Sincerely, Garrett Mercier.
Dear Garrett,
Hey, how’s it going? It’s the beginning of junior year and you’re struggling to write this letter. You’re not very good at writing at all, really. You’re pretty inconsistent in your tone. You have many thoughts, but you lack organization. You have a lot trouble writing the first sentence because you never know how to start your writing. It took you like an hour to start this, and I don’t really think you’re doing a good job. You have trouble with diction, I guess you a have a baby vocabulary. You’re kind of good at a few things though.
You have many ideas in your head. I guess you can be good at defending a point, sometimes. It seems like you can write forever it is just really unorganized and probably does not sound so good. Right now you are trying to improve your writing skills and hoping you have by the time you are reading it. I’m thinking you can just start writing a lot more and practice. Possibly by having to write a lot for English class this year you will get better.
You like reading a lot more than writing. You could read for days, unless you’re forced to read something you’re not interested in. You can read fast, I guess. You’re pretty good at comprehending and just remembering what you read. Other times, you can just be really unmotivated to read and you won’t even actually take in what you’re reading.
This year you really hope to get better at writing. You would like to get better organization skills. I’m not too good at brainstorming as well. I would like to read more books, and I would like to learn to appreciate better writings. Overall, you need to do better in all of your classes for the rest of the time you’re in high school. You need to get in less trouble. It would be cool to graduate with a good GPA, but you kind of have low standards.
After you get out of high school, you need to get a good job, son. You better still be skateboarding, and it would be cool if you found a honey dip. I will be proud of you, or me, if you meet these goals. Thanks for reading, I hope it helped you in some way. Happy Kwanza.
Sincerely,
Garrett Mercier.